Gone, All That's Left Is Your Rose

Cute Emo Cartoon

Beautiful Inside And Out

My mom's Valentines Day flower

Painting with neil

After reading this essay I felt like I had experienced the event as it happened. The details used are so well described it as if it is happening before your eyes. It shows a excellent amount of detail and expression it makes you feel like you are the writer. "after forcing somebody else to carry his paint, he sprints through the parking lot with the rest of his friends, a wave of blue in a sea of black." I can imagine this happening I see Neal running to meet the other painter boys to cheer on the team. "the sun is already starting to dip toward the horizon when the game ends, but the boy's varsity game is still to come" the image made of the sunsetting and the boys waiting to play becomes perfect in the readers mind. To me this is a very expresses and detailed essay that plays the day and night in the readers mind, even though it has already happened it feels like it is happening while you read it.